It will then follow on from a high shot of a male hugging a teddy bear and then going to kiss the teddy bear to create a light hearted feel about my short film.
It then quick cuts to a long shot of a pretty stereotypical fashionable girl, it will show that she is on the phone arranging to go to the coffee shop with her friends.
It then cuts back to a shot of the boy laying in bed surrounded by sweet wrappers to represent that he doesn't have much of life. This is to get the point across of him being a 'loser'. It then shows him getting ready for work.
It then cuts back to the girl walking into the coffee bar going to meet friends.
This then carries on happening everyday as an ellipsis.
Until one day it shows him learning her order off by heart, and writing a love poem and then on the last day he goes to give her the poem in with the menus and waits nervously for her to read them. Until her boyfriend walks in and he quickly runs back to get the poem and to chuck it in the bin he then looks up and another pretty girl appears.
In evaluation my story line follows Todorovs theory of narrative theory structure.
No comments:
Post a Comment